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Daddy is home

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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It sounds like powerful memory from your childhood. I could see the the moment your father returned home from his enlistment. The mix of confusion and surprise at seeing him for the first time, along with with your mother's reaction, must have been quite memorable. You do a wonderful job of sharing this memory as well as the emotion that you felt. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so very much
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the First Memory writing prompt. That day must have been both exciting and confusing for you. But I can see why it would be one of your first memories. Well-written and interesting. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you.