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Lust

and combust

2 total reviews 
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
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Your poem captures a sense of passion so well! It suggests desire but also some skillful communication! haha For me this was describing where a relationship grows into passion as the couple gets to know each other better. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    I tried several times to post a reply here but there was a glitch. Tom fixed it.

    Thank you for the insightful review, it is much appreciated. I hope you received at least the nomination I sent you.

    When I voted for Nostildamus this morning the contest page opened and I saw my entry did not appeal to members. I should have posted my poem on Etna, she is in full swing, spouting lava.

    Keep safe!

reply by Michael Ludwinder on 09-Jul-2024
    I did. Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    No glitch then, I'm glad ! (smiles)
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This 5-7-5, Lust, has the proper formatting and promotes the tango with the proper motivation that should attract anyone interested in moving past the Texas two-step.

Note: skillful

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    I had to google the moves for the Texas two-step. It looks a fun dance , it reminds me of a waltz.

    PS: Thank you for the thoughtful note but I believe that is the American spelling , the English drop a L ( wink)