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The First Fire

My earliest memory that I remember.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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That's a lovely memory of your Grandpa Jones and the stories he shared with you. It sounds like he made those moments very special with his storytelling and the little treats he gave you. I thought this was well written. And it was such a joy to read!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the wonderful feedback and the five star review. I'm honored that you found my story enjoyable.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fascinating story your Grandpa told to you about the first fire and how the creatures all had their own tale about it. A fine memory about your Grandpa and the time you spent together, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and for the feedback. Your awesome 😎