2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "How Long Must I Wait".
7 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
Is it a case of falling for lies, or believing in illusions? The happiness may not exist at all, but the sorrow and regret are all too real, und we see how they will continue, even in the midst of obvious signs.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Is it a case of falling for lies, or believing in illusions? The happiness may not exist at all, but the sorrow and regret are all too real, und we see how they will continue, even in the midst of obvious signs.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
she looks quite comfortable stretched out on that big bed lol
an interesting and thought-provoking little verse
i liked the touch of random rhyme
i like the second stanza with the 'i die...' in a faded colour - i think it brings out the emotion there
nice. thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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she looks quite comfortable stretched out on that big bed lol
an interesting and thought-provoking little verse
i liked the touch of random rhyme
i like the second stanza with the 'i die...' in a faded colour - i think it brings out the emotion there
nice. thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The passion and the sad emotion are prevalent in this beautiful poem and presentation. The drooping sunflower at a special touch to this presentation. Thank you for sharing this with us. We're blessed.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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The passion and the sad emotion are prevalent in this beautiful poem and presentation. The drooping sunflower at a special touch to this presentation. Thank you for sharing this with us. We're blessed.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from RJ Heritage
She waits in vain, I think, but I think that she knows this. The flowers that are dry express this sentiment very well. Perhaps, she finds solace in her hopes that it might change? Well written and presented.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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She waits in vain, I think, but I think that she knows this. The flowers that are dry express this sentiment very well. Perhaps, she finds solace in her hopes that it might change? Well written and presented.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ, for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh my, how I feel the yearning and just-beneath-the-surface fury of this free verse, replete with rueful, winsome artwork. You have brought all her feelings to life so beautifully. xoxox
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Oh my, how I feel the yearning and just-beneath-the-surface fury of this free verse, replete with rueful, winsome artwork. You have brought all her feelings to life so beautifully. xoxox
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Rachelle
Thank you very for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Always my pleasure, Gypsy. xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
The droopy sunflowers say so much - what should be a symbol of happiness is sad because of the missing loved one whose love letters do not come for whatever reason.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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The droopy sunflowers say so much - what should be a symbol of happiness is sad because of the missing loved one whose love letters do not come for whatever reason.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Gypsy. I hope you are well
Boy, that was a powerful last line with visual effects without the photos. And the picture you painted with the droopy head sunflowers was brilliant.
I'm surprised because my poetry stresses meter and rhyming. This has neither and yet I like it. I love it.
So, accordingly you get one of my six star ratings
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Hi, Gypsy. I hope you are well
Boy, that was a powerful last line with visual effects without the photos. And the picture you painted with the droopy head sunflowers was brilliant.
I'm surprised because my poetry stresses meter and rhyming. This has neither and yet I like it. I love it.
So, accordingly you get one of my six star ratings
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much. I don't write rhyming poems, working so hard to have rhyme and meter scares my muse and she runs away. Free verse comes naturally to me. That's one of the reasons I love Japanese poetry.... no rhymes! LoL
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy