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Let Me Propose a Toast

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This this antanaclasis sentence brings us to a toast from the speaker who has hobbled himself with the untimely combination of peanut butter and toast. Reminds me of the milk commercial.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
    Thanks for stopping by and leaving your thoughts. Now I'm trying to remember the milk commercial.
reply by Bill Schott on 06-Jul-2024
    A history buff had all types of John Burr memorabilia when called by a radio station to answer a John Burr question for a million dollars. He had a mouth full of peanut butter and no milk to clear it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your writing captures a wonderfully funny moment! The story is funny but also I felt bad for him. Great job creating an entertaining visual! haha

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
    Thank you