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A Mighty Swing

A baseball bat can come in handy for protection.

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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What a play on words! I loved it. Your poem is concise but interesting. For me it is suggesting a moment of an unexpected encounter. Well done!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
    Thanks for the read and the review. Appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This antanaclasis sentence, A Mighty Swing, bats around the idea that a piece of wood and a flying rodent are different somehow. Sometimes I'd like to use one on the other.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
    Thanks for read and input.