Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I started to thank you for this entry, then had to take a few hours for rest as I wasn't feeling good. I can't recreate my train of thought but, anyhow, you know I admire your work and look forward to each chapter.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024

Thank you. Are you feeling better?

reply by jim vecchio on 05-Jul-2024

Yes. I think something was going around. I just needed a little rest, thank you!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Nicely done again! Like your past chapters the dialogue flows naturally. I love the blend of adventure, emotion, and character development in your book. It continues to keep me interested and I'm enjoying the journey.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024

Thank you for being part of the journey!

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Nicely written.Good work.
It was a gift from my father. It's the only thing of him that remains so I don't like people touching it. - Missing quotes.
Yes, my father was a barbarian.... - Missing quotes.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024

Are quotes still used when it's written and not spoken?

reply by Wayne Fowler on 05-Jul-2024

Hmmm. Good question. By the time I finished the piece, I forgot that the first few exchanges were in writing. Why was that since they quickly engaged in speech?

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024

It's because Dave can't talk and he actually wanted to answer. He's missing part of his tongue