The Plastic Demon
Poem about credit card abuse and temptation2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures the allure of credit cards so well! I love the playful yet cautionary tone. I love your word choices especially the "Plastic Demon". How true is that! You do a great job of sharing the temptation and consequences of the plastic demons!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Your poem captures the allure of credit cards so well! I love the playful yet cautionary tone. I love your word choices especially the "Plastic Demon". How true is that! You do a great job of sharing the temptation and consequences of the plastic demons!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from Colorado Owl
This teaches a good lesson. I think we all know someone who has been bitten by this demon! I would just correct the spelling from "mkae" to "make". Thank you, Brian
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This teaches a good lesson. I think we all know someone who has been bitten by this demon! I would just correct the spelling from "mkae" to "make". Thank you, Brian
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Sorry for the typo. Thank you for the review.