The Unwilling Heir
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12 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Okay, it's time to find the treasure. Your story has led us on a merry chase, with many side trips and lots of action. I'm glad they solved the mystery of the sword's hiding place.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Okay, it's time to find the treasure. Your story has led us on a merry chase, with many side trips and lots of action. I'm glad they solved the mystery of the sword's hiding place.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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And the time approaches...hope it wasn't too boring! LOL
Thanks as always,
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! They found the sword. It sounds like the team have all patched up some relationship issues and affirmed new connections. I especially liked how Sandra could reconnect with her father and how he's looking out for her - even in her possible love interest. Guess he'll be at the wedding!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hooray! They found the sword. It sounds like the team have all patched up some relationship issues and affirmed new connections. I especially liked how Sandra could reconnect with her father and how he's looking out for her - even in her possible love interest. Guess he'll be at the wedding!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Yes...the romantic in me wants everyone to patch things up and come out being the best it could be. Of course, it doesn't always happen in real life, but I guess that's why I write. I can make it be whatever I want it to be.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
This is a great chapter. What a wonderful celebration they're all having and they even found the long sought for sword. But they still need to get the treasure. Romance is in the air as well. A big hug, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This is a great chapter. What a wonderful celebration they're all having and they even found the long sought for sword. But they still need to get the treasure. Romance is in the air as well. A big hug, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hi, Ulla...I am thrilled to death at the moment. I just finished writing the story. You will have four more chapters to go for the ending. I think I love this story more than any other I have written. Thanks for always being there.
Smiles, Carol
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It is a great story. Now only three more chapters to go. Just read and reviewed. xcx
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Thanks so much Ulla.....Posted Chap 47 and 48. the Final will be tomorrow ...my time. Thanks again for reading. I hope you enjoy!
Smiles, Carol
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I will read them as soon as I can. I'm so busy writing my story as well, lol. xcx
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I think since I finished and am in writing mode, I will enter the contest as well....what the heck... got to write something, right? Thanks as always, Ulla.
Smiles, Carol
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I just knew you would!! Good luck. I will, of course read along. Smiles back. xcx
Comment from LJbutterfly
This has been an incredible journey. I've enjoyed every step and chapter. You're moving to a "happy ever after" ending for both the ghosts and mortals. I'm glad. How about Tim...noticing Michael eyeing Sandra?
I'm preparing myself to accept the story as over, but perhaps some time in the future, we can have another Sandra, investigative reporter story. (Some people are never satisfied) Lol.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This has been an incredible journey. I've enjoyed every step and chapter. You're moving to a "happy ever after" ending for both the ghosts and mortals. I'm glad. How about Tim...noticing Michael eyeing Sandra?
I'm preparing myself to accept the story as over, but perhaps some time in the future, we can have another Sandra, investigative reporter story. (Some people are never satisfied) Lol.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Lorraine, you have been so supportive and full of encouragement through out this journey and I am so thankful. And another Sandra story...that's a thought!
Thanks as always,
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a very good chapter as they celebrate getting rid of the bad guys or jailing them. Once more they turn to finding the sword and this time they are successful. Is the sword the treasure or will it somehow lead them to the treasure? Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This is a very good chapter as they celebrate getting rid of the bad guys or jailing them. Once more they turn to finding the sword and this time they are successful. Is the sword the treasure or will it somehow lead them to the treasure? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thanks Carol for sticking with the story and enjoying it. It will be sad to see our friends disappear. Appreciate the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We have the sword and a possible romance between Sandra and Michael. All is right with the world. I really like this story and know it's coming to an end. Not at all happy about that.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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We have the sword and a possible romance between Sandra and Michael. All is right with the world. I really like this story and know it's coming to an end. Not at all happy about that.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I'm not so happy about it either. Had someone ask what was going to happen to the treasure and if the mortals would get their share. I said I hadn't thought about it since for me it had been the journey not the treasure. guess I better start thinking.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
This is another excellent chapter. The sword everyone has been obcessing over has now been found. This is a treasure hunt with many clue always leading a little further along. I'm along for the ride knowing the treasure will be found at some point.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. The sword everyone has been obcessing over has now been found. This is a treasure hunt with many clue always leading a little further along. I'm along for the ride knowing the treasure will be found at some point.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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We are closing in on the treasure and I am thrilled you are enjoying it. Thanks as always for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Good overcomes evil! This was wonderful, Carol. Now they have found the sword, the rest should be a bit easier. I wonder what the 'treasure' is. It might not be diamonds and gold. Hmm. I'm not going to try and work it out, it will most likely be wrong, but it's fun trying to guess. LOL. It looks like we are coming to the end now. This has been an incredible story, my friend. Well done, I'm looking forward to seeing what the key reveals. Love and hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Good overcomes evil! This was wonderful, Carol. Now they have found the sword, the rest should be a bit easier. I wonder what the 'treasure' is. It might not be diamonds and gold. Hmm. I'm not going to try and work it out, it will most likely be wrong, but it's fun trying to guess. LOL. It looks like we are coming to the end now. This has been an incredible story, my friend. Well done, I'm looking forward to seeing what the key reveals. Love and hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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To tell the truth, Sandra, I haven't thought much about the treasure. The story for me was always about the journey. Guess I should start thinking. Thanks so much as always.
Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
Comment from karenina
This is precisely how I feel when getting down to the last few bites of a favorite dessert. I've enjoyed it so much I must take little bites to make it last longer!
So it is with your book, Carol! The Mafia has been dispensed with, the clues are leading the spirits to the treasure, and redemption and I'm so proud of the job you've done, even as I prepare for the tale to end!
I'm misty eyed, dear friend! What a journey!
It won't be long now...
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This is precisely how I feel when getting down to the last few bites of a favorite dessert. I've enjoyed it so much I must take little bites to make it last longer!
So it is with your book, Carol! The Mafia has been dispensed with, the clues are leading the spirits to the treasure, and redemption and I'm so proud of the job you've done, even as I prepare for the tale to end!
I'm misty eyed, dear friend! What a journey!
It won't be long now...
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I've actually been wondering if this is the one I try to publish. If I can figure out how to start. I love this story (funny since I hated it when I began). Thanks for sticking by my side and encouraging me to go forward.
Love ya, Carol
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I encourage you to go forward with this...
It is extraordinary!
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I did write a clip for the back page of the jacket. I was playing around yesterday, trying to put something together. Even wondered if I should change the title...
Does Unwilling Heir fit?
Echoes of Redemption
Spirits of Purgatory
and a few others
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Let's discuss this off the site...
Comment from Wendy G
A wonderful set of cryptic clues, and now they have found the sword. The villains have been overcome and dealt with. Redemption is around the corner for many of the ghosts, and perhaps there is love for Sandra and Michael. Well done!
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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A wonderful set of cryptic clues, and now they have found the sword. The villains have been overcome and dealt with. Redemption is around the corner for many of the ghosts, and perhaps there is love for Sandra and Michael. Well done!
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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The story is wrapping up and my characters have face many trials but succeeded. I'll miss them when it ends. Thanks for your review and kind comments.
Smiles, Carol
