Song of the Dead
A fantasy story tied to vision and music4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Congratulations on your first milestone post. You're very brave attempting a contest right from the start. I'm wondering where the continuation of this story might lead. Good luck with the contest.
This was the beginning of my mothers undoing, and the moment my life changed forever. (mother's)
Mother was like a prophet bringing bad news to those who refused to listen and I was like a guardian angel (listen, you switched subjects)
Once the last note had diminished she spoke. (diminished,)
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Congratulations on your first milestone post. You're very brave attempting a contest right from the start. I'm wondering where the continuation of this story might lead. Good luck with the contest.
This was the beginning of my mothers undoing, and the moment my life changed forever. (mother's)
Mother was like a prophet bringing bad news to those who refused to listen and I was like a guardian angel (listen, you switched subjects)
Once the last note had diminished she spoke. (diminished,)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR MILESTONE POST!!!!! I want to b there for the next hundred as well. This proves even year's ago you were a great writer. Now, please continue your story!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR MILESTONE POST!!!!! I want to b there for the next hundred as well. This proves even year's ago you were a great writer. Now, please continue your story!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you! It will be a while before I continue this story. I'm planning a sequel to the tainted, a prequel with Silvester as the main character, and a collection of backstories for the main characters
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Wow! You really have a lot of work cut out for yourself!
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I know right. I imagine it will take about 2 years to complete the series as I am returning to work soon and won't be able to post or write as consistently as I am now. I hope to complete The Tainted by August before I'm completely integrated back into work. I also have a part time job as a piano player so I'm going to be quite busy!
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I will miss you. If you have time, drop me a comment or two. I will look forward to reading your words when you can post them.
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For sure :) At the very least I'll prioritize my Sunday posts about Acts. I'll definitely reply to you!
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Great! I hopefully will have a sixth star then.
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Lol your reviews are always appreciated regardless :)
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Ricky1024
This post number 100 was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This post number 100 was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reading :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! Amethyst's deep bond with her mother and the impact of her mother's gifts are beautifully shared. The descriptions and reflections on music add a lyrical quality to the piece. The suspense kept me engaged from beginning to end. Your talent for storytelling truly shines through - keep up the excellent work!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Nicely done! Amethyst's deep bond with her mother and the impact of her mother's gifts are beautifully shared. The descriptions and reflections on music add a lyrical quality to the piece. The suspense kept me engaged from beginning to end. Your talent for storytelling truly shines through - keep up the excellent work!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you :) I wrote this chapter years ago but never finished the story. Perhaps now is a good time to pick it up again