2024 Favorites
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "You are my True North"x
12 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I feel we all need a true North to keep us guided and on track. For me God is my true North. Your presentation and your poem are perfect. Thank you for sharing them with us.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
  |
I feel we all need a true North to keep us guided and on track. For me God is my true North. Your presentation and your poem are perfect. Thank you for sharing them with us.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy
Comment from jessizero
This poem was so sweet and romantic. I loved your idea of someone being your "true north." I also loved your colors and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
|
This poem was so sweet and romantic. I loved your idea of someone being your "true north." I also loved your colors and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Jessi
Gypsy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like your presentation very much. It was extremely appealing to the eye. I think it is a very lyrical poem. The first two lines definitely drew this reader in. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts in this double tanka.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
|
I like your presentation very much. It was extremely appealing to the eye. I think it is a very lyrical poem. The first two lines definitely drew this reader in. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts in this double tanka.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Crystie
Gypsy ❤️
Comment from GWHARGIS
I really liked the nautical feel of this. True North is your moral compass as well. We know what is right. We know where our heart should be. This was beautiful as you take reader with you across the sea. Beautiful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
|
I really liked the nautical feel of this. True North is your moral compass as well. We know what is right. We know where our heart should be. This was beautiful as you take reader with you across the sea. Beautiful. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy ❤️
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This one especially appealing to me because my husband and I say the same thing to each other constantly. It's an indescribably wonderful feeli g, and you captured it here beautifully with your gorgeous tanka as well as the ethereal artwork. You are The Real Deal, Gypsy. Every post is a masterpiece. No hyperbole; true fact. Xo
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
|
This one especially appealing to me because my husband and I say the same thing to each other constantly. It's an indescribably wonderful feeli g, and you captured it here beautifully with your gorgeous tanka as well as the ethereal artwork. You are The Real Deal, Gypsy. Every post is a masterpiece. No hyperbole; true fact. Xo
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Rachelle. I am happy your husband and you have such a loving and romantic marriage, it's a true blessing.
Gypsy ❤️
-
I agree.
Comment from lyenochka
I feel that way about Jesus. It's so easy to be thrown this way and that by the chaos of the world. But Jesus will show the way and He didn't leave us as orphans. He gave us the Holy Spirit to comfort and guide us to Him!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
|
I feel that way about Jesus. It's so easy to be thrown this way and that by the chaos of the world. But Jesus will show the way and He didn't leave us as orphans. He gave us the Holy Spirit to comfort and guide us to Him!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
-
Yes, I need Him more than ever. I'm really depressed.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love you, ❤️
Marival
Comment from Neonewman
This is another beautifully crafted piece, my friend. The artwork is stunning and pairs well with your talent.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
|
This is another beautifully crafted piece, my friend. The artwork is stunning and pairs well with your talent.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
-
God bless, Steve, I need all the blessings I can get.
Thank you very much, Steve 😊
Gypsy
-
Don't we all? Always a pleasure.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your explanatory notes are always so helpful because I never know about these things. I like the theme of your North Star symbolising steadfastness and enduring love. A beautiful verse complemented so well with your image to create maximum impact. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
|
Your explanatory notes are always so helpful because I never know about these things. I like the theme of your North Star symbolising steadfastness and enduring love. A beautiful verse complemented so well with your image to create maximum impact. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Debbie. Your encouraging words mean a lot to me.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i think my compass is askew LOL!
a great double tanka about finding where you belong...
wonderful imagistic word choices and smooth flow
loved these lines...
"in life there are highs
and there are lows--
waves come
and waves go"
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
|
i think my compass is askew LOL!
a great double tanka about finding where you belong...
wonderful imagistic word choices and smooth flow
loved these lines...
"in life there are highs
and there are lows--
waves come
and waves go"
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so well written. The imagery of the south wind and ocean waves beautifully shows the depth and reach of your emotions. The metaphor of "true north" shares your love for him and the feeling that he will always be there for you. Your poem is so touching! Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
|
Your poem is so well written. The imagery of the south wind and ocean waves beautifully shows the depth and reach of your emotions. The metaphor of "true north" shares your love for him and the feeling that he will always be there for you. Your poem is so touching! Well done!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
-
Thank you very much, Michael
Gypsy