In a Shabby Room
A bouquet haiku for the club15 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely thought, June as you show us that there does not need to be a big bouquet to have impact, for it is the thought behind it, and the love of the child that thought to pick a few daisies from the garden to brighten up a shabby room.
Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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A lovely thought, June as you show us that there does not need to be a big bouquet to have impact, for it is the thought behind it, and the love of the child that thought to pick a few daisies from the garden to brighten up a shabby room.
Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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There is much joy in the simple things of life - especially when they come from the hearts and hands of our little ones. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for participating in the Haiku Club Flowers event. A great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good job,
Gypsy
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Thank you for participating in the Haiku Club Flowers event. A great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good job,
Gypsy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
I really enjoyed your poem as it brought back memories to me from when my kids when they were small would come from the garden with a little bunch of daisies or buttercups saying lovely sweet things, I would put them in a glass on the windowsill. Thanks for sharing and Sparking those wonderful memories
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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I really enjoyed your poem as it brought back memories to me from when my kids when they were small would come from the garden with a little bunch of daisies or buttercups saying lovely sweet things, I would put them in a glass on the windowsill. Thanks for sharing and Sparking those wonderful memories
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
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You're very welcome June
Comment from Aussie
A beautiful oil painting to compliment your Haiku. Children are so tuned-in to nature. I really liked this Bouquet of Flowers. Trust a child to try to brighten a shabby room - children are streets
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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A beautiful oil painting to compliment your Haiku. Children are so tuned-in to nature. I really liked this Bouquet of Flowers. Trust a child to try to brighten a shabby room - children are streets
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your interpretation of this image is magical June and flowers always lift our spirits for both the receiver and the giver, a fine post for the club, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Your interpretation of this image is magical June and flowers always lift our spirits for both the receiver and the giver, a fine post for the club, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A wonderful contrast here between the shabby room and the brightness of the flowers, while your middle line delights with the image of a child gathering the daisies. Your lovely haiku, June, skilfully captures an array of emotion. Well done on this club entry! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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A wonderful contrast here between the shabby room and the brightness of the flowers, while your middle line delights with the image of a child gathering the daisies. Your lovely haiku, June, skilfully captures an array of emotion. Well done on this club entry! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from karenina
Oh, this is so special. As a mom and a grandmom, I will never treasure a "Flower Shop" arrangement as much as I've loved these tiny bouquets of love from big hearts with little hands. I love the way you sum it up:
"Joy in a glass jar"
I wish my grandkids were still young enough to do this... At ten, my youngest grandson, Maxwell, gathered me some dandelions last summer. I loved them, but my heart broke a bit when he said-
"I guess I'm getting too old for this."
The best things in life are free!
Karenina
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Oh, this is so special. As a mom and a grandmom, I will never treasure a "Flower Shop" arrangement as much as I've loved these tiny bouquets of love from big hearts with little hands. I love the way you sum it up:
"Joy in a glass jar"
I wish my grandkids were still young enough to do this... At ten, my youngest grandson, Maxwell, gathered me some dandelions last summer. I loved them, but my heart broke a bit when he said-
"I guess I'm getting too old for this."
The best things in life are free!
Karenina
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
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Yes! My youngest grandson used to call a yard full of dandelions gone to seed "A FIELD OF WISHES!'
:)
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem for the club and enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This is a very well written poem for the club and enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from lyenochka
Delightful poem! And I really liked the ending line "joy in a jar" - it brings joy because of the love that motivated the little hands which picked the flowers - usually, it's dandelions. ð???
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Delightful poem! And I really liked the ending line "joy in a jar" - it brings joy because of the love that motivated the little hands which picked the flowers - usually, it's dandelions. ð???
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very lovely and well written poem about the dashes picked by a child's hand. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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June, This is a very lovely and well written poem about the dashes picked by a child's hand. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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There is joy in the simplest things in life. And children have a special way of giving them to us when we need them the most. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts.
