Comment from jim vecchio

Exceptional

This is a red-letter moment for Taya and Demi. Now the readers can see the deep feeling they have for each other. Were I Demi, I wouldn't have waited. I proposed on my second date! Hope there is a marriage in the future.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024

Oh my! You certainly know what you want and aren't afraid to get it! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

reply by jim vecchio on 01-Jul-2024

I had prayed about it and we got to know ech other on the phone beforehand, and I didn't want to live life without her.

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024

Oh that makes more sense. It was your 2nd meeting, just 2nd date

reply by jim vecchio on 01-Jul-2024

I told God everything I wanted in a wife, and she was it. The first time I wasn't self-conscious with a woman.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Love at last.
A lightbulb went off in my head. - There was a light bulb on, and then it went off? (light bulb is two words, but would that culture use that reference?)
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024

Oh that's a good point. Thank you

Comment from Steve Foreman

Exceptional

I obviously missed the previous 34 chapters - which is a crying shame; because I really enjoyed reading this one, and I am looking forward to reading more. It is well-written, emotive and has a unique time/place setting. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024

Thank you, I would be honored if you continue reading :)