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Egos Prohibited

I am I am sick of loud mouthed important people.

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written contest entry you have penned. God's way is always the best way. You used great descriptive and true words and very interesting imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you Terri
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Well, I am in full agreement with your law: "The law prohibiting show-offs with their cold, bully tactics and those who ridicule the less fortunate." I may be wrong but I believe this is something you can do. I don't know the procedure but it might be to get a whole bunch of signatures. Whether you get enough signatures or not you've got mine. Lol best of luck in the contest. Even more than that, best of luck in reforming human nature. LOL

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your encouragement and your 'vote'. Alas, I have the words but not the courage. I would have to start closer to home, i.e., with supposed friends.
reply by Dr. Nad on 02-Jul-2024
    L O L I hear you! You are most welcome for the review and best of luck in the contest.
Comment from Erika Whittle
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This was a captivating read. It's unfortunate but a lot of the people you're talking about would be the one's making the law! ð?¤£ð??­
I do very much agree that actions having consequences should be made clear from a young age. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Many thanks, Erika for your encouragement.
Comment from Liliana Tricks
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Your take on tough times and egos hits the nail on the head. The idea of needing a law to rein in those insecure egotists is spot on. Your reflection on the past humility during wartime versus today's self-centered political chaos really makes you think. Your personal link to historical events adds a poignant touch to your musings, showing a real desire for a more caring society in the midst of all this power play.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
    Many thanks for this review Liliana. Your assessment of the tale is secure and encouraging.