No More I Love You
When love walks away5 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Omigoodness!! What a JOB on this entry!! The feelings are so raw and real, they're little short of palpable. And then, for the perfect cherry on top, you also found the perfect graphic to accentuate your excellent words. I bet I'll be seeing this one in the Winner's Circle. Good luck to you, Mystery Poet!! xo
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Omigoodness!! What a JOB on this entry!! The feelings are so raw and real, they're little short of palpable. And then, for the perfect cherry on top, you also found the perfect graphic to accentuate your excellent words. I bet I'll be seeing this one in the Winner's Circle. Good luck to you, Mystery Poet!! xo
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Rachelle,
Thank you for your much appreciated review of this poem about my No more I Love You. It tied for 1st place in the 30 syllable contest.
All the best,
Eugene
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Wow, fantastic!! Congratulations!! xo
Comment from nancyjam
A sad story, beautifully told in just 30 words. The end of a marriage, or an affair is always heartbreaking. You capture that ending here. I like that you rhymed the lines too.
Nancy
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A sad story, beautifully told in just 30 words. The end of a marriage, or an affair is always heartbreaking. You capture that ending here. I like that you rhymed the lines too.
Nancy
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from patcelaw
When is syllable born for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day great week and an exquisite month. Patricia.
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When is syllable born for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day great week and an exquisite month. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
This is written beautifully abou the loss of love. A loss that moat people at some point in their lifetime has endured. Its so difficult to be left behind grieving for someone who is alive and well but no longer wants to live and breathe along side you anymore. It's really devastating.a great entry for the 30 syllables poem prompt, well done and good luck!
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This is written beautifully abou the loss of love. A loss that moat people at some point in their lifetime has endured. Its so difficult to be left behind grieving for someone who is alive and well but no longer wants to live and breathe along side you anymore. It's really devastating.a great entry for the 30 syllables poem prompt, well done and good luck!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is painful to read because it brings up personal memories of when my love walked away. "dreams are left to die"... so true. If this didn't happen to you, you have an excellent imagination. If it did happen to you, I'm sorry. Very well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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This is painful to read because it brings up personal memories of when my love walked away. "dreams are left to die"... so true. If this didn't happen to you, you have an excellent imagination. If it did happen to you, I'm sorry. Very well done.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
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Colorado Owl,
Thank you for your 6 star review. I too share the pain of my love walking away after 17 years of marriage 16 years ago. And yes, dreams of what might have been are left to die.
All the best,
BermyBye
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Mine walked away after 16 years of marriage, 24 years ago. I hope you're doing well now.