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You Are Loved

contest entry

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Very warm and gracious and encouraging entry for this 30 Syllable writing prompt. The picture portrays your words beautifully, too. Good luck at the polls, Mystery Writer. xoxo

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
    Thank you.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 03-Jul-2024
    My pleasure. xo
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

This has a rhyming scheme. There is no set meter.

It sounds like you're trying to rescue people maybe who aren't praying to God or submitting to his will.

You offer Him to those people. Some will listen some won't. I will listen

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
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This thirty-syllable poem, You Are Loved, has the proper count and reminds whoever needs to hear it that God is still in His Heaven and can be our best friend.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Thank you