Try as I may
His still not happy...5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Try as I May, presents a relationship that seems to be the armless hug from the indifferent other, and the muted lectures given to the deaf.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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This poem, Try as I May, presents a relationship that seems to be the armless hug from the indifferent other, and the muted lectures given to the deaf.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your recognition of the emotions in my writing means a lot.
Comment from Nicki.B
This is such a deep poem, like a cry for help. I had a feeling of being trapped reading it.
How frustrating it must be foe those who try their best say after day and it's still over good enough and to still mot he heard. It a lot more present and real in people's lives than we know. But those who suffer, do so in silence and it becomes the norm. Which is just so very sad. Everyone deserves happiness. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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This is such a deep poem, like a cry for help. I had a feeling of being trapped reading it.
How frustrating it must be foe those who try their best say after day and it's still over good enough and to still mot he heard. It a lot more present and real in people's lives than we know. But those who suffer, do so in silence and it becomes the norm. Which is just so very sad. Everyone deserves happiness. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read and appreciate it.
Thank you sincerely
Comment from Colorado Owl
Wow - Your poem does an excellent job of describing what happens in many relationships. It's so difficult to stop being a victim, and just listen and try to look at what's happening from the viewpoint of the other person. I was married to someone who was always a victm and never could find joy in life. So sad. Thank you for this!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Wow - Your poem does an excellent job of describing what happens in many relationships. It's so difficult to stop being a victim, and just listen and try to look at what's happening from the viewpoint of the other person. I was married to someone who was always a victm and never could find joy in life. So sad. Thank you for this!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind and encouraging feedback. It means so much to me to have your support
Comment from Colorado Owl
Wow - Your poem does an excellent job of describing what happens in many relationships. It's so difficult to stop being a victim, and just listen and try to look at what's happening from the viewpoint of the other person. I was married to someone who was always a victm and never could find joy in life. So sad. Thank you for this!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Wow - Your poem does an excellent job of describing what happens in many relationships. It's so difficult to stop being a victim, and just listen and try to look at what's happening from the viewpoint of the other person. I was married to someone who was always a victm and never could find joy in life. So sad. Thank you for this!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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I'm grateful for your thoughtful comments on my poem.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing captures the frustration of feeling unappreciated in a relationship. You share this in such a powerful pay. The excellent imagery and raw emotion shared here create a powerful portrayal of the pain and isolation experienced. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Your writing captures the frustration of feeling unappreciated in a relationship. You share this in such a powerful pay. The excellent imagery and raw emotion shared here create a powerful portrayal of the pain and isolation experienced. Excellent job.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your kind words.
