Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Wow! This is the most dangerous training session I've ever heard of! Your saga sometimes reminds me of a cross between a classic kung fu movie and "Doctor Strange". Can't wait till they depart on that "bumpy ride".

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

I love Dr. Strange! Such a great compliment :)

reply by jim vecchio on 28-Jun-2024

I don't know if you were a fan of Dr. Strange's first days, but the artist, Steve Ditko, was one of the most original artists around. The movie did his work justice, but I didn't expect the Ancient One to be a woman.

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

I like that they used that actress because her look is very androgynous which I feel suits an ancient one

reply by jim vecchio on 29-Jun-2024

You are right! I usually don't like it when they change ethnicity or color or sex, but that was a good choice.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Nicely done again. You do a great job of giving us glimpses into each character's personality especially with their interactions during the training session. The use of aura and elemental abilities adds a unique element to the story. I think this chapter sets up anticipation!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This chapter was very interesting and well presented.
I Particularly enjoyed the ending.
Aldo, well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thank you