The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Tyler's Bootcamp Pt 1"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
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Comment from jim vecchio
I believe I told you I was a fan of Japanese and Chinese movies. They have a way of portraying battles, especially martial arts type attacks, in a very believable way. You did tht in your story. The telling of the practice attack was very well done. You could easily have failed due to the number of characters involved, but it was well written.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I believe I told you I was a fan of Japanese and Chinese movies. They have a way of portraying battles, especially martial arts type attacks, in a very believable way. You did tht in your story. The telling of the practice attack was very well done. You could easily have failed due to the number of characters involved, but it was well written.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you, I'm a fan of korean novels, and dramas. I'm glad it came out okay. I struggled with how I was going to write it when so many things were happening at the same time.
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You did fantastic job. Speaking of Korean movies, have you seen "Pulgasari"?
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No I haven't. What's it about?
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"Pulqasari" is available on the Internet. It is about a giant creature helping oppressed villagers. The story goes that the leader of North Korea kidnapped the actress and movie staff and forced them to make the movie. Can't verify the truth, though. Another Korean movie, from South Kore, is "Yongary, Monster Of The Deep" on dvds and internet. It has the cheesiest dinosaur you ever saw.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. I especially liked how you used dialogue during the training session to give us an opportunity to learn more about each character's personality. I especially liked Derek's hesitation in fighting women. You've written a chapter that sets the stage for further exploration into this unique world.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I thought this was well written. I especially liked how you used dialogue during the training session to give us an opportunity to learn more about each character's personality. I especially liked Derek's hesitation in fighting women. You've written a chapter that sets the stage for further exploration into this unique world.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good plot development. Working up to the big battle.
I agree with Dave. It's lucky that Dave didn't kill her
However, she did waist time playing... (waste)
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Good plot development. Working up to the big battle.
I agree with Dave. It's lucky that Dave didn't kill her
However, she did waist time playing... (waste)
Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Oops, thanks!