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Why?

Questioning why someone leaves and having to accept it.

3 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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Eight syllables and you've summed up that eternal question that most of us have had to ask at some point in our lives. Things don't always work out...but having the consideration to talk it through and say farewell helps both parties to move forward.

"I guess this is goodbye" is a sorry state to be left in!

Karenina


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much!
reply by karenina on 25-Jun-2024
    Best of luck!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good along with the topic.
-You ask a good question and have
assumed what the answer was.
-It sounds like a situation where
actions proved to be the key
to your answer in the last line.
-You also have the required rhyme.
-A good entry; good luck!!!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much!
reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Jun-2024
    You are very welcome.
Comment from jessizero
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Well, you've pretty much said all that needs to be said. You got the syllable counts and rhymes right for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much!