Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I could feel the passion of this situation as I read this contest entry. This is a good poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I want to wish you the best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for your review, Barbara.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

This is a beautifully romantic 3 line poem Heather and I could visualise the scene as I read, especially- my elbow on your pillow. A lovely sensual poem. Good luck in the contest heather.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks for reading, Valda. xxx

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest.

Very clear imagery and I love the presentation.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Hugs,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks so much, Marival. xxx

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

This is a nicely composed 3 line 5-7-7 poem piece well thought out and well written your choice of artwork highlights your poetry Good Luck in the three line poetry contest

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I think this is a great entry for the three line poetry contest. You addressed a loved one, and you got the syllable count right. The thought of a rainbow encircling the head is a lovely one. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

I can easily envision the love illustrated in this 3 line poetry entry. When I was young, I recall my mother propped up with her elbow on my father's pillow as they talked. In your poem, the rainbow reminds me of promising love. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

I'm glad my poem brought back cherished memories for you.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 3 line Poetry contest. A lovely visual described in this short poem. You did a nice job in a very few words, which isn't easy. The artwork is interesting and adds to the presentation of your piece. Good job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for your review, Marylin.

Comment from Shanbreen

Excellent

This is quite a powerful poem on the changes of one's perception because of love. The last line did take me by surprise. I like the descriptive aspect--my elbow on your pillow-- of being in bed with him. Well written 3-line poem. Best for the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from estory

Excellent

I like the fractured sense of experience in the fragmented images, and the way the kalaidascope images seem to create a complete picture of a relationship out of different pieces. estory

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks so much for reading. Have a nice day.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-7, In the Rainbow, has the proper formatting and shows how the closeness of a relationship often amends or embellishes one's perception altogether.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024

Thanks for your review, Bill.