Downsizing
An unexpected find triggers powerful memories2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
Somewhere in this verse is the common thread of moving on towards the final reward. Reducing -- dimming -- transcending and making a funeral a time to remember and feel.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Somewhere in this verse is the common thread of moving on towards the final reward. Reducing -- dimming -- transcending and making a funeral a time to remember and feel.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Bill.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem does a wonderful job of showing the emotions tied to downsizing and the difficult journey of letting go. Your choice of words and imagery - particularly of "filleting our life" - shares the pain and difficulty of discarding the physical remnants of our existence. Your writing is also uplifting when you show the bittersweet nature of moving forward.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Your poem does a wonderful job of showing the emotions tied to downsizing and the difficult journey of letting go. Your choice of words and imagery - particularly of "filleting our life" - shares the pain and difficulty of discarding the physical remnants of our existence. Your writing is also uplifting when you show the bittersweet nature of moving forward.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Michael. Appreciated.