Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The wolf was tempted by the sweet young thing, but the hunter had a different plan. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. It's very well written and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2024

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed this story and your good end rhymes and this tale has a chilling message. Your metre is a little uneven as well as the syllable count, but I enjoyed your clever story Jake, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

This is an excellent poem with a wonderful picture to match the intrigue of the narrative. This is a cautionary tale of great importance. We need to be careful where we go, who we go with, and what time it is. But we can also take heart and the fact that in our most vulnerable times, God sends sentinels of protection.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024

Thanks for the review.

reply by Dr. Nad on 20-Jun-2024

You are most welcome Jake!

Comment from Pamusart

Exceptional

Hi, Jake

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

You have written a wonderful poem here. Nice rhyming scheme, good rythym and flow. You came close to having perfect meter. Iambic pentameter.

I like this so much that I'm giving you one of my few Sixers. You can be proud of this

I really enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024

Thanks for the review and the six star rating.