Comment from patricia dillon

Excellent

I am not sure where the 100 languages came in. But I never tire of hearing your love story and it's great that you never tire of telling it. You deserved to do much better in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

thanks as always

reply by patricia dillon on 21-Jun-2024

You're welcome

Comment from Gunner Lil

Exceptional

I wonderful poem with few words that does not clutter
the subject of love.
An easy read with excellent love and a good pace.
Thank you and good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

thanks as always

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

This poem seems to tells a tale of love affair that was a contradiction in terms. The flow is as smooth as a gentle stream. Well done, and thanks for sharing your work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024

thanks it was a challenge not to use the prompt words which was the point

Comment from RodG

Good

Some people--like you and her--are very fortunate to KNOW immediately what will be. Your rhyme scheme tripped you up a bit. MET in line 6, stanza 2, should be MEANT.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024

cool thanks a lot I will fix that