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The Tainted

Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Lacking"
A fantasy story following hunter Taya

3 total reviews 
Comment from jim vecchio
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This episode was extremely action packed. Quite a contrast from the character sketch I just read about Taya. You are a very versatile writer. Continue to amaze us in your series!

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much!
reply by jim vecchio on 18-Jun-2024
    I should be thanking you for my reading pleasure.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent story my friend that is extremely interesting and captured my attention throughout the piece!

Thank you for sharing and God bless you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
    Thank you for reading! Blessings
Comment from Neonewman
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Obviously, the tainted are crazy, maybe diseased, or somewhat like zombies. This is an intriguing story. I wouldn't want to get caught up in their rage.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
    They're a little zombie like and a little possessed like. You find out what they actually are later in the story. Thanks for reading!
reply by Neonewman on 18-Jun-2024
    Oh, possessed zombies, this is a unique twist.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
    Kinda but in case other people read these replies I don't want to give away too much! Otherwise I would tell you :) thanks for reading!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
    There's a certificate active on the first half of the story. I think it gives 5 points. There's also 2 additional background stories on the male lead (Demetri, 2000 words) and female lead (Taya, 3000 words). Taya has a certificate. If you?re interested I'd be honored if you read it.
reply by Neonewman on 18-Jun-2024
    Awesome! Have you had a chance to review Dodie Rae, I have two chapters up so far. I'd be honored to hear your thoughts.
    Steve
reply by Neonewman on 18-Jun-2024
    LOL! Same here.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
    I haven't but I'll check it out :)