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Gutteral Words

Words from the gut

4 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I can't think of any words to make up right now. I am tired. I need a shower and some sleep. I enjoyed this missive, lot's more unpacking to do, have a good week Karen

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
    Thank you.
    Moving is just about my least enjoyable activities.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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You have a witty mind, Sir!

I lugged extra hard at:

Harkch: means "What're you gonna do with that gun/knife/rope/rat poison/frying pan. And why are your eyes all squinty?"

I suppose we should never take our better halves for granted.
D

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
    lug, lug
    Thank you for your very kind review.
reply by Douglas Goff on 17-Jun-2024
    Fat fingers. Laughed
Comment from bhogg
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Thanks a post that brought a smile my way. Sniglets. I'm going to give that one some thought. As I read, I said to myself, "That guy's crazy. A world of hurt is coming his way!"

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
    Hah! Glad he ain't me!
    Thank you for the review.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contrast. Good luck with that!!

This is very original. I don't know how to pronounce the words you came up with, but it looks like his demise is near.

All of those things that he loves that she does are taking their toll on her. You should take her out once in a while or have a nice catered quiet candle lit dinner at home. He can miss his games for a while.

That he did not miss his games, is fatal for him

I enjoyed reading your story

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
    Hah! Glad he ain't me!
    Thank you for the review.