Summer's Lazy Rhythm
Tanka poetry27 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, all of a sudden here come some clouds rushing by.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line.
Congratulations on you wins and good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Yes, all of a sudden here come some clouds rushing by.
You have the right amount of syllables for each line.
Congratulations on you wins and good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review! So appreciate your comments and opinion.
Melissa
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review! So appreciate your comments and opinion.
Melissa
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, summer does seem to be lazy and it's always fun to watch the clouds glide across the sky and to follow the shadows. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Yes, summer does seem to be lazy and it's always fun to watch the clouds glide across the sky and to follow the shadows. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Barbara, thanks so much for your lovely review about my lazy summer verse. I always look forward to the long hot days. Summertime always energizes me :).
Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
Tanka lady, I am out of sixes and this tanka is so deserving. I love your isolated islands floating along. And you create such a peaceful mood with words like flitter, lazy rhythm, and languidly.
Nice images, perfect turning line. You are a pro at this format for sure.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Tanka lady, I am out of sixes and this tanka is so deserving. I love your isolated islands floating along. And you create such a peaceful mood with words like flitter, lazy rhythm, and languidly.
Nice images, perfect turning line. You are a pro at this format for sure.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Debbie, hello my sweet friend, thanks so much for your lovely review about my lazy summer verse. I always look forward to the long hot days. Summertime always energizes me :). Hugs.
Melissa
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your beautifully worded Tanka. Wonderful imagery of cloud shadows like islands in a sea of green. A lovely vision of a warm summer day. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
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I enjoyed your beautifully worded Tanka. Wonderful imagery of cloud shadows like islands in a sea of green. A lovely vision of a warm summer day. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your beautifully worded Tanka. Wonderful imagery of cloud shadows like islands in a sea of green. A lovely vision of a warm summer day. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed your beautifully worded Tanka. Wonderful imagery of cloud shadows like islands in a sea of green. A lovely vision of a warm summer day. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Nancy, thanks so much for your lovely review about my lazy summer verse. I always look forward to the long hot days. Summertime always energizes me :).
Melissa
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice Tanka, Melissa. We just had a day that looked like the picture you posted. I think we are in for a long hot summer. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Nice Tanka, Melissa. We just had a day that looked like the picture you posted. I think we are in for a long hot summer. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Paul, thanks so much for your lovely review about my lazy summer verse. I always look forward to the long hot days. Summertime always energizes me :).
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good pivot line.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Excellent entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good pivot line.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Gypsy, thanks so much for your lovely review about my lazy summer verse. I always look forward to the long hot days. Summertime always energizes me :).
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the mysterious action of this cloud as it makes shadows on the field, this is such a fine descriptive post Melissa, full of imaginative words, a skilful post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I love the mysterious action of this cloud as it makes shadows on the field, this is such a fine descriptive post Melissa, full of imaginative words, a skilful post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Dolly, thanks so much for your lovely review about my lazy summer verse. I always look forward to the long hot days. Summertime always energizes me :).
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
You had me thinking about the lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer when we slow down and just enjoy life. Great imagery. A fine entry for the contest, Melissa!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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You had me thinking about the lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer when we slow down and just enjoy life. Great imagery. A fine entry for the contest, Melissa!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hello June. Thanks so much. I am looking ahead a few weeks and can't wait for those days to arrive. I love the laziness of hot summer days :)
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Melissa.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-Effective imagery throughout, beginning
with the setting in the opening two lines.
-A very good pivot line with repetition of the 'i' sound.
-Very good closing lines go back to the clouds
that seem to be floating to "summer's lazy rhythm."
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Melissa.
-A well written tanka with a good topic.
-Effective imagery throughout, beginning
with the setting in the opening two lines.
-A very good pivot line with repetition of the 'i' sound.
-Very good closing lines go back to the clouds
that seem to be floating to "summer's lazy rhythm."
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Pam. I appreciate your wonderful review!!
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa.