Moment
A touch in Time9 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
A lovely, happy poem much needed and appreciated in these troubling times. Thank you for penning such a touching, hopeful piece!
Your words are musical, yet strong, because they are positive and beautifully written.
Katharine
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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A lovely, happy poem much needed and appreciated in these troubling times. Thank you for penning such a touching, hopeful piece!
Your words are musical, yet strong, because they are positive and beautifully written.
Katharine
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Gansach,
This is a good free verse that uses repetition well to show us all that can happen in a moment and how these happenings can change lives and the world.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Hi Gansach,
This is a good free verse that uses repetition well to show us all that can happen in a moment and how these happenings can change lives and the world.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much!
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You are most kindly welcome, Gansach.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have heard that moment described at a 'God Wink'. I like that description. I do believe God does wink at us off and on. LOL Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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I have heard that moment described at a 'God Wink'. I like that description. I do believe God does wink at us off and on. LOL Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Esther Brown
So well written. Those tiny fleeting moments when we connect with our otherworldliness. Cross the boundary of experienced reality. Knowing a place when you have never been, feeling like a stranger is a soul mate, evil crawling up the hairs on your neck. Esther
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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So well written. Those tiny fleeting moments when we connect with our otherworldliness. Cross the boundary of experienced reality. Knowing a place when you have never been, feeling like a stranger is a soul mate, evil crawling up the hairs on your neck. Esther
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thanks very much!
Comment from jessizero
This free verse was excellent! I loved all the things a moment can be or mean. I especially liked the last two lines. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This free verse was excellent! I loved all the things a moment can be or mean. I especially liked the last two lines. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and the extra star. I'm glad you liked it. Much appreciated!
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thank you so much for opening a vista for us to pier at the immortal "moment" with some brand new clear angles. You picked a marvelous picture to help broaden our horizons and see with new definitions the momentous impact of a special moment in time. Thanks.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for opening a vista for us to pier at the immortal "moment" with some brand new clear angles. You picked a marvelous picture to help broaden our horizons and see with new definitions the momentous impact of a special moment in time. Thanks.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely review.
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You are most welcome my friend.
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You are most welcome my friend.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Your free verse poem is fantastic. Your unique combination of words makes for an exceptional poem.(I'm sorry I don't have 6 stars left to give you.
Good luck with this and all your writing.
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Your free verse poem is fantastic. Your unique combination of words makes for an exceptional poem.(I'm sorry I don't have 6 stars left to give you.
Good luck with this and all your writing.
Cindy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much. I appreciate it!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written I enjoyed listening to it very much. We all need to realize that we do not live our lives day by day. We live our lives moment by moment and your poor very clearly points this out. Have a good day and may God bless you and bless every moment of this day. Patricia .
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is very well written I enjoyed listening to it very much. We all need to realize that we do not live our lives day by day. We live our lives moment by moment and your poor very clearly points this out. Have a good day and may God bless you and bless every moment of this day. Patricia .
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely review! Best wishes to you!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a wonderful free verse poem. I often think of the concept of a moment in time. Every moment is sp consequential. It fascinates me. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is a wonderful free verse poem. I often think of the concept of a moment in time. Every moment is sp consequential. It fascinates me. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your review and the extra star. This is one of my favorites as I tried to describe those little moments I feel that make time stop for a second and mean so much.
