Act of Endurance
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi, TPAC
I'm not sure I read your notes correctly. They say that. You escaped the true meaning of family to care for other members. But, I did not see that happening in your poem. Instead, I saw more distance between you and the other relatives, aunts and uncles.
It's true if the prior generation can't get along, then the current one probably doesn't either I couldn't tell if the subject of your story was in touch with his mother or father at all
At first when I read this and your notes, I thought the subject of the story would go to take care of his mother or father. That is just based on your notes.
Then, the first Stanza talking about Mother Nature being the carer. That confused me. You are talking about your mother and mother nature in the same sentence
I really enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Hi, TPAC
I'm not sure I read your notes correctly. They say that. You escaped the true meaning of family to care for other members. But, I did not see that happening in your poem. Instead, I saw more distance between you and the other relatives, aunts and uncles.
It's true if the prior generation can't get along, then the current one probably doesn't either I couldn't tell if the subject of your story was in touch with his mother or father at all
At first when I read this and your notes, I thought the subject of the story would go to take care of his mother or father. That is just based on your notes.
Then, the first Stanza talking about Mother Nature being the carer. That confused me. You are talking about your mother and mother nature in the same sentence
I really enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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These factors were when I was an infant: attending to age twelve. I, then, connected to my Mother. Be careful, what you ask for. I sorry about the confusion. Yet, my given intent was consideration. Thanking you for this super rate: despite.
Comment from Dr. Nad
I enjoy how you have determined to make the best out of what might be considered, to some people, an unconventional family. I see from the poem and your authors notes that you have determined to make the best of a somewhat awkward situation. I love how you have reminded us through your story that we can and should do the same thing. Love and embrace all who provide a sense of connectedness to your life.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I enjoy how you have determined to make the best out of what might be considered, to some people, an unconventional family. I see from the poem and your authors notes that you have determined to make the best of a somewhat awkward situation. I love how you have reminded us through your story that we can and should do the same thing. Love and embrace all who provide a sense of connectedness to your life.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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This was the thing which confused me during my earlier childhood. Counter statements, by those spoken: and actually performed. We're all bad. Thanking you for your thoughtful words and generous rate.
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You are most welcome, my friend. God bless you.