Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Getting more interesting all the time. Thank you for this glimpse into Taya's training. This could easily be converted to an anime movie or a series of manga novels.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Well I would like to try publishing it when I'm done. Don't know how that will go though. Stories are meant to be read

reply by jim vecchio on 13-Jun-2024

I have no access to the anime or manga markets. I once did to the comics industry, but I never gave into it, and instead took a career as a Program Coordinator.

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Well I wouldn't be opposed to a manga. But ultimately I would like it to be a novel.

reply by jim vecchio on 13-Jun-2024

Don't listen to my advice. I sent a couple of scripts to a comic company once, just as it went into bankruptcy.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

This is a very well-written chapter. Good work.
It put me back into boot camp. The only thing was, all rest periods were designed for sedintary learning - no downtime except meals and sleep.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Lol it's the benefit or being a hunter and not a soldier! Did you serve?

reply by Wayne Fowler on 13-Jun-2024

USMC

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Nice! I don't live in the US but Canada is an allied country so thank you for your service

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024

Thank you :)