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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
I'd say perfect timing to light the way for the perfect message ever given and or, received with intent and delivered within the purest of love... that of humankind and the energy surrounding it.
Outstanding metaphors... especially fond of: 'like a dulcet creek's song'... and the nod to Khaled Hosseini, with 'a thousand splendid suns'. Oh yes, one of my favorite read so far... for sure! It fitted so perfectly within this most splendid poem. The beautiful use Of 'milliard' to amplify the impact of the spectacular view in mind's eye within the illumination of 'silver moons'... yes, beautiful imagery!
One milliard of stars for this Gogyohka poem MariVal!
With our thoughts we create...
conscious kindness to humanity.
Warmest regards,
Jamie.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hi MariVal,
I'd say perfect timing to light the way for the perfect message ever given and or, received with intent and delivered within the purest of love... that of humankind and the energy surrounding it.
Outstanding metaphors... especially fond of: 'like a dulcet creek's song'... and the nod to Khaled Hosseini, with 'a thousand splendid suns'. Oh yes, one of my favorite read so far... for sure! It fitted so perfectly within this most splendid poem. The beautiful use Of 'milliard' to amplify the impact of the spectacular view in mind's eye within the illumination of 'silver moons'... yes, beautiful imagery!
One milliard of stars for this Gogyohka poem MariVal!
With our thoughts we create...
conscious kindness to humanity.
Warmest regards,
Jamie.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Hola, Jaime,
I have said it a thousand times before but I will say it again, thank you for your kind insightful feedback and exceptional reviews. I hope you are well. I often think about you and pray for your well-being, my friend.
I always forget to give credit to Khaled Hosseini, for his book's title.
I love the phrase, Khaled Hosseini, for his book's title.
I love the phrase, a thousand splendid suns... it's so poetic and wonderfully imagistic. I will add it to my poem's author notes.
Con cariņo, besitos y abrazos, amigo mio,
MariVal
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Image looks like an actor from CA. Your poem informs us that he's quite thoughtful, cherishes love, does not hate; and that he's an extraordinary man who could be the twinkle of someone's eye.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Image looks like an actor from CA. Your poem informs us that he's quite thoughtful, cherishes love, does not hate; and that he's an extraordinary man who could be the twinkle of someone's eye.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for, have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a beautiful poem. I loved it. The words are so heartfelt. I like the pictures. They go nicely with your words. The poem is well written. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This is a beautiful poem. I loved it. The words are so heartfelt. I like the pictures. They go nicely with your words. The poem is well written. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a perfect poem to honor our Lord and Savior. He set the example of how we should conduct ourselves towards other. We fail miserably. I so wish I had a six left. So sorry.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This is a perfect poem to honor our Lord and Savior. He set the example of how we should conduct ourselves towards other. We fail miserably. I so wish I had a six left. So sorry.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
This I will say is one of your better works since it's honoring our Lord and Savior Jesus the Christ.
Well written Rich in Theme and Imagery and as always,
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Peaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This I will say is one of your better works since it's honoring our Lord and Savior Jesus the Christ.
Well written Rich in Theme and Imagery and as always,
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Peaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Dr Ricky, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from gansach
Your presentations are always so beautifully done and enhance your poetry. I also enjoy learning about the Japanese styles of writing, so interesting. A thoughtful piece with attractive language. Lovely!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Your presentations are always so beautifully done and enhance your poetry. I also enjoy learning about the Japanese styles of writing, so interesting. A thoughtful piece with attractive language. Lovely!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, gansach
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
This feels like a love song to Jesus. I think only God can give us the "purest love" and loving Him should be pure, too. I loved how you share about how Jesus loved the "unlovable" even tax collectors and prostitutes, and lepers - all those shunned by society. And I loved the description: of His laughter being like a "dulcet creek."
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This feels like a love song to Jesus. I think only God can give us the "purest love" and loving Him should be pure, too. I loved how you share about how Jesus loved the "unlovable" even tax collectors and prostitutes, and lepers - all those shunned by society. And I loved the description: of His laughter being like a "dulcet creek."
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. It is a love song to Jesus.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
love the first pic - and it goes great with the twilight eyes (my fave line)
a great gogyohka with cool imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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love the first pic - and it goes great with the twilight eyes (my fave line)
a great gogyohka with cool imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I think you will agree, that he was ahead, and still is ahead of all creation because he was the one that was with God. Jesus Christ our Lord and Savior, is like no other indeed. His selflessness on to death for our sins, gives us the hope of eternal life. All of this accomplished through and because of his pure love.
Very spiritual and humbling poem that is based on historical evidence.
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I think you will agree, that he was ahead, and still is ahead of all creation because he was the one that was with God. Jesus Christ our Lord and Savior, is like no other indeed. His selflessness on to death for our sins, gives us the hope of eternal life. All of this accomplished through and because of his pure love.
Very spiritual and humbling poem that is based on historical evidence.
RJ
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Yes, He is the one who "is" for eternity.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I enjoyed this very much from the start to the finish. It is so true that he loved the unlovable from the beginning. Wonderful! I enjoyed the graphic too. I still love going forward.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed this very much from the start to the finish. It is so true that he loved the unlovable from the beginning. Wonderful! I enjoyed the graphic too. I still love going forward.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicole
Gypsy