The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Village of Tal"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
3 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
A great continuation of your storyline. Will we find out more about that village? When are Demi and Taya going to really connect? Will there be a marriage in the future?
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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A great continuation of your storyline. Will we find out more about that village? When are Demi and Taya going to really connect? Will there be a marriage in the future?
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Their romance is a slow burn as it's a subgenre. Their marriage will occur in the Afterwards.
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Thanks. They do seem to belong together.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Spacing is difficult in FanStory. And I don't know why they don't want us to indent paragraphs. What I've learned to do is to use 'Advanced Editor when pasting and after hitting 'Paste' press 'Shift, Control, and V' simultaneously. That preserves line spacing. Then, I go through the entire piece and insert a space between paragraphs. That makes it easier to read.
"What are you my dad? - You need a comma after 'you'.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Spacing is difficult in FanStory. And I don't know why they don't want us to indent paragraphs. What I've learned to do is to use 'Advanced Editor when pasting and after hitting 'Paste' press 'Shift, Control, and V' simultaneously. That preserves line spacing. Then, I go through the entire piece and insert a space between paragraphs. That makes it easier to read.
"What are you my dad? - You need a comma after 'you'.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Ohhh thanks!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Erika
This chapter did not have any Tainted in it. But, you developed the characters a bit more of the two that were in this chapter
I hope it really was a pillow against the bathroom door and not a silencer. They sound like they have a pretty good relationship. I enjoyed your story chapter. It was well written. I really looked for mistakes, but could not find any so that's a testament to your thoroughness.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Hi, Erika
This chapter did not have any Tainted in it. But, you developed the characters a bit more of the two that were in this chapter
I hope it really was a pillow against the bathroom door and not a silencer. They sound like they have a pretty good relationship. I enjoyed your story chapter. It was well written. I really looked for mistakes, but could not find any so that's a testament to your thoroughness.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you :)