Love Never Left
A renewed love.17 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Now THAT's a love poem!! Boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl (and it's more robust than ever.) Good luck with this in the Love Poem Poetry Contest! I can imagine it doing well. xo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Now THAT's a love poem!! Boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl (and it's more robust than ever.) Good luck with this in the Love Poem Poetry Contest! I can imagine it doing well. xo
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much for the great review!
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My pleasure!! xo
Comment from nancy Laine
I enjoyed this poem. It is relatable for anyone who loved, lost, and eventually reunited. It kind of eludes to you don't know what you have until it's gone. Well written!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. It is relatable for anyone who loved, lost, and eventually reunited. It kind of eludes to you don't know what you have until it's gone. Well written!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry contest. This is a poem from an obvious romantic in real life. Nice flow to the poem and good rhymes. you did a very nice job for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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An excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry contest. This is a poem from an obvious romantic in real life. Nice flow to the poem and good rhymes. you did a very nice job for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the kind words and nice review! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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This is a very beautiful and very well written love poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the great review, and thanks for the luck in the contest!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is lovely, Jodi! I knew it was going to come good in the end, so I enjoyed the structure of your verse and how the mood changed half-way through. It all rhymes beautifully and has such a pleasing, readable quality to it. One of my favourite lines is: My mind's unpleasant, being bare. Simple, honest and endearing. Then we have the passion of the reunion, contrasting with the more introspective first half. All sweetly done! Thank you for sharing. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is lovely, Jodi! I knew it was going to come good in the end, so I enjoyed the structure of your verse and how the mood changed half-way through. It all rhymes beautifully and has such a pleasing, readable quality to it. One of my favourite lines is: My mind's unpleasant, being bare. Simple, honest and endearing. Then we have the passion of the reunion, contrasting with the more introspective first half. All sweetly done! Thank you for sharing. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I really appreciate your kind words and lovely review! Thanks Debbie!
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this poem. It told a very good, moving story. It makes me wish I could reconnect with an old love. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. It told a very good, moving story. It makes me wish I could reconnect with an old love. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I was curious if I should change anything because of the "good" rating, but I do appreciate your honest review. Thank you!
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I meant to give it a 5. I went back and changed it to 5. I would have given you a 6 if I had any left. Thank you for pointing out my mistake
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Oh you are so sweet! I really appreciate that! Thanks Jessi!
Comment from GoWiSt
Very nice complementary picture art choice.
"Love Never Left" Where was she, hiding in the attic?
"And was your distant coldness true?
Or, was it really me, not you?" My dear, dear, dearest, it's always you, and never me. I'm perfect!
"Possessively, I grabbed you tight,
With pure obsession in my sight," Why, you randy minx, you---rrrrr!
"Than with you for eternity." Uh, eternity's a really long time. You might wanna reconsider after a decade or so.
A very lovely love poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Very nice complementary picture art choice.
"Love Never Left" Where was she, hiding in the attic?
"And was your distant coldness true?
Or, was it really me, not you?" My dear, dear, dearest, it's always you, and never me. I'm perfect!
"Possessively, I grabbed you tight,
With pure obsession in my sight," Why, you randy minx, you---rrrrr!
"Than with you for eternity." Uh, eternity's a really long time. You might wanna reconsider after a decade or so.
A very lovely love poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for the review and humor!
Comment from nancyjam
A beautiful, well crafted poem about the strength of true love to overcome
doubts and misgivings.
Well rhymed and metered. A lovely entry to this contest. I wish you the best.
Nancy
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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A beautiful, well crafted poem about the strength of true love to overcome
doubts and misgivings.
Well rhymed and metered. A lovely entry to this contest. I wish you the best.
Nancy
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the very nice comments on my poem!
Comment from QC Poet
So void of thought, I sit and stare,
My mind's unpleasan being bare, this is just one of the many lines I enjoyed reading in your captivating Love poem. Good Luck with your poem in this contest
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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So void of thought, I sit and stare,
My mind's unpleasan being bare, this is just one of the many lines I enjoyed reading in your captivating Love poem. Good Luck with your poem in this contest
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for loving my poem!
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Jodi Ann, this is just beautiful! The feeling is of comes through so clearly! And the fear of it being gone! You make it tangible, so packed with emotion! Maddy
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Jodi Ann, this is just beautiful! The feeling is of comes through so clearly! And the fear of it being gone! You make it tangible, so packed with emotion! Maddy
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank so much for enjoying my poem Maddy!
