Summer Days
The best of times13 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
This lovely poem brought back memories galore. Really caught my younger years and this flowed nicely. Image good and fits the bill as a rhyming poem. Thanks for the sharing and I hope it goes well in the contest.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This lovely poem brought back memories galore. Really caught my younger years and this flowed nicely. Image good and fits the bill as a rhyming poem. Thanks for the sharing and I hope it goes well in the contest.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a wonderful rhyming poem about childhood. I could relate to it. Wouldn't it be nice to be able to visit childhood moments once in a while. Maybe time travel will let us some day. I thought your presentation matched well.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is a wonderful rhyming poem about childhood. I could relate to it. Wouldn't it be nice to be able to visit childhood moments once in a while. Maybe time travel will let us some day. I thought your presentation matched well.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review and another extra star. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have so many great memories of my childhood (probably colored a lot by nostalgia), I'd love to go back so I could re-appreciate them.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Childhood writing prompt contest. It brought memories of my childhood. Good rhymes that doesn't sound forced.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Excellent entry for the Childhood writing prompt contest. It brought memories of my childhood. Good rhymes that doesn't sound forced.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
I loved this poem. We had so much more exciting childhoods than the kids do nowadays, on a lot less money! So well written with an interesting rhyme scheme, this work evokes some great memories. Excellent.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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I loved this poem. We had so much more exciting childhoods than the kids do nowadays, on a lot less money! So well written with an interesting rhyme scheme, this work evokes some great memories. Excellent.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome. I honestly loved it x
Comment from Erika Whittle
What lovely childhood experiences! This poem reads well and I think it was smart to choose a font that resembles a child's hand writing. I hope you keep these memories close to your heart for a very long time. Best wishes
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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What lovely childhood experiences! This poem reads well and I think it was smart to choose a font that resembles a child's hand writing. I hope you keep these memories close to your heart for a very long time. Best wishes
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This really encompasses everything that you go through as a child. I remember playing hopscotch, playing with Barbies, monkey bars, hide and seek and tag and drive in movies in our pajamas. Those were the days!
Well written with a nice rhyme too!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This really encompasses everything that you go through as a child. I remember playing hopscotch, playing with Barbies, monkey bars, hide and seek and tag and drive in movies in our pajamas. Those were the days!
Well written with a nice rhyme too!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Wonderland, presented with five aabC quatrains, brings those dreamlike days of youth back around so we can pick and choose the good times to relive.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This poem, Wonderland, presented with five aabC quatrains, brings those dreamlike days of youth back around so we can pick and choose the good times to relive.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from NanaGaye
What an interesting pattern of rhyming,I love it and beautiful picture. You certainly deserve the six stars. All the best in the contest (opps I just did a rhymn)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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What an interesting pattern of rhyming,I love it and beautiful picture. You certainly deserve the six stars. All the best in the contest (opps I just did a rhymn)
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you so very much, so kind of you!
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent rhyming poem with a very challenging style I'm not so sure I have seen it before, but then there are lots of things I haven't seen L.O.L. What I'm referring to is that fourth line that always ends rhyming with bone. You have built a coherent case for the cherishing of summer days. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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This is an excellent rhyming poem with a very challenging style I'm not so sure I have seen it before, but then there are lots of things I haven't seen L.O.L. What I'm referring to is that fourth line that always ends rhyming with bone. You have built a coherent case for the cherishing of summer days. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
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You are most welcome My friend!
Comment from RodG
Your childhood memories remind me of my own--all that time outside with friends and those special activities at night. You're right about those memories drifting away over time. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Your childhood memories remind me of my own--all that time outside with friends and those special activities at night. You're right about those memories drifting away over time. Rod
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!