Midnight Hide N' Seek
A night of unforgettable fun5 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Childhood writing prompt. This sounds like an amazing game for a large family, especially on a night with a beautiful moon and many stars. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the Childhood writing prompt. This sounds like an amazing game for a large family, especially on a night with a beautiful moon and many stars. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
To play hide and seek, where shadows abound.
I love the wording and I love the way this flows along. Hide and seek is always fun but in the dark? It holds another meaning and makes it even more fun. I tried it a few times as a kid in areas that were safe:-)
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To play hide and seek, where shadows abound.
I love the wording and I love the way this flows along. Hide and seek is always fun but in the dark? It holds another meaning and makes it even more fun. I tried it a few times as a kid in areas that were safe:-)
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from dovemarie
Dear poet, wonderful account of children playing in the night, good rhyme, I could just picture the kids being involved in the game, and tumbling on the grass laughing after the game. Dove
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Dear poet, wonderful account of children playing in the night, good rhyme, I could just picture the kids being involved in the game, and tumbling on the grass laughing after the game. Dove
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from zanya
What a delightful poem to read - the reader is engaged with the Hide & Seek sharing in the fun and frolic of the childhood game -Do children still experience such joy in our techie world?
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What a delightful poem to read - the reader is engaged with the Hide & Seek sharing in the fun and frolic of the childhood game -Do children still experience such joy in our techie world?
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautiful and forgotten game of childhood, I wonder how we can revive this game that is happening in real life with real people. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Beautiful and forgotten game of childhood, I wonder how we can revive this game that is happening in real life with real people. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024