Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

So it seems like Taya and Demi are going to be a thing. Your story still progresses well. I myself would have jumped into that water if I could. I wonder if they'll be able to find that sister.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Yah they are. A little romance sub genre

reply by jim vecchio on 10-Jun-2024

I like writing about love and romance!

reply by jim vecchio on 10-Jun-2024

Looking forward to it!

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Thanks! Also, I just read the little bio about you on the home page. Congrats! I can't believe you've hit 500 posts and have only been on here for a year! That's amazing!

reply by jim vecchio on 10-Jun-2024

At the beginning of last year, after my wife's death, I did not know if I was going to survive. Most of last year was spent in hospitals and rehabs. I did not want to die without some sort of legacy. My wife wanted me to do a novel when she was here. I am thankful The Lord granted me life and inspiration.

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

I see. I'm glad you overcame and continued on. I'm sure your wife would be proud.

reply by jim vecchio on 11-Jun-2024

I will have to face her one day once more and I don't want her to be ashamed.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

The writing is good. error-free as near as I can tell.
I'll have to go back and catch up in order to better discern the relationship between Demi and Taya.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Yah! Grammar isn't my strong suit. Thank you for reading!

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Good work here. And grab my attention and kept it throughout the entire duration of this entry. Nice job and I wish you all the best going forward from here

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024

Thank you for continuously reading!