Marry-time Connection
All at sea.4 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
I find this 5-7-5 writing prompt entry fascinating. I can imaging how you passed each other along the way without noticing each other, until some happenstance fused you together. Very creative and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing your reflections. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I find this 5-7-5 writing prompt entry fascinating. I can imaging how you passed each other along the way without noticing each other, until some happenstance fused you together. Very creative and enjoyable. Thanks for sharing your reflections. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much :)
Comment from Sallyo
This is fun, with the clever punning title. I suggest you edit the last line though... You use an apostrophe in "til" only when it's spelled with one L, because it's then a contraction on UNtil. Till, with two Ls, is a word in its own right.
Nicely nautical!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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This is fun, with the clever punning title. I suggest you edit the last line though... You use an apostrophe in "til" only when it's spelled with one L, because it's then a contraction on UNtil. Till, with two Ls, is a word in its own right.
Nicely nautical!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Sally, especially for spotting the error on 'til. I appreciate it :)
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Awesome entry overall. The graphic goes along with this perfectly too. Great presentation. I wish you all the best going forward from here with your work
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Awesome entry overall. The graphic goes along with this perfectly too. Great presentation. I wish you all the best going forward from here with your work
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Nicole.
Comment from zaraduck6
Such a beautifully written poem! I love the word choice and literary devices, and you nailed the 5-7-5 syllable count of a haiku. This was a truly breathtaking poem, and the artwork is phenomenal. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Such a beautifully written poem! I love the word choice and literary devices, and you nailed the 5-7-5 syllable count of a haiku. This was a truly breathtaking poem, and the artwork is phenomenal. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Zara.