Shame On You, Moon!
are you laughing at us?2 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
I like the way you were able to make the second and fourth line rhyme. You made the syllable count with 23. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
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I like the way you were able to make the second and fourth line rhyme. You made the syllable count with 23. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Shame on you, moon!
You shine on her by my side
Yet she doesn't know me
Or care if I laughed or cried
I can feel the emotion behind this. Great work!!
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Shame on you, moon!
You shine on her by my side
Yet she doesn't know me
Or care if I laughed or cried
I can feel the emotion behind this. Great work!!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024