2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "The Greatest Kind of Love".
6 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
love the hands holding the flower at the bottom - great ending to a very sensual poem of life
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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love the hands holding the flower at the bottom - great ending to a very sensual poem of life
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Love is worth pursuing even if it does work out the way we had hoped, we always know that we are loved, and if we can find it within, we should share, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Love is worth pursuing even if it does work out the way we had hoped, we always know that we are loved, and if we can find it within, we should share, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, kym
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I have heard many times that you cannot love more than one person in romantic love. My grandmother was the first person I knew to disagree with that. And over the years, I have come to see that she was right.
I think your words embrace the capacity to do so, when the love is based on moral principle that comes from God, it then balances what we might feel, with one's choice only to act in the will of God.
I like your words and the way you have expressed them and presented them.
Good luck.
RJ
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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I have heard many times that you cannot love more than one person in romantic love. My grandmother was the first person I knew to disagree with that. And over the years, I have come to see that she was right.
I think your words embrace the capacity to do so, when the love is based on moral principle that comes from God, it then balances what we might feel, with one's choice only to act in the will of God.
I like your words and the way you have expressed them and presented them.
Good luck.
RJ
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
Love shows up at many different times in our lives. We can feel it for a fleeting time then grow out of it. We change and they change. Then there are the loves that change us and stay with us forever. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Love shows up at many different times in our lives. We can feel it for a fleeting time then grow out of it. We change and they change. Then there are the loves that change us and stay with us forever. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen, you understand the poem perfectly.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
There's always a risk in love- of being heartbroken. But we know that if we invest in love, there is much to be gained. And God will provide all the love even if human love fails us. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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There's always a risk in love- of being heartbroken. But we know that if we invest in love, there is much to be gained. And God will provide all the love even if human love fails us. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Big 😊Sister,
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this with us. There are all types of love. My goal in my novels it to develop unconditional love that all of us deserve in our lives. Of course, no long is stronger than God's love for us. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this with us. There are all types of love. My goal in my novels it to develop unconditional love that all of us deserve in our lives. Of course, no long is stronger than God's love for us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy