The Tainted
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "First Attack"A fantasy story following hunter Taya
2 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
This chapter was particularly violent, but I see you are fleshing out your characters and we are learning more about them. Your story length remains very good. Should encourage many great reviews.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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This chapter was particularly violent, but I see you are fleshing out your characters and we are learning more about them. Your story length remains very good. Should encourage many great reviews.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you!
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You're continuing your story very well!
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Your sword was flung that way!" Derek pointed to something glittering in the distance. At that Dave turned around to retrieve his prized possession.
Nice imagery
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Your sword was flung that way!" Derek pointed to something glittering in the distance. At that Dave turned around to retrieve his prized possession.
Nice imagery
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you