Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu

Excellent

The eyes and smile are often the features that are first noticed when one person falls for another. If these sparkle, then the warmth of the individual's personality can shine through.

The heart that captivates, the friendship that cannot be traded and the sense of devotion for one another in that instance when two people who meet are meant to be,
makes a striking love poem that tells many different stories.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024

Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate that you took the time to read and interpret my poem and then write to me about it. I wish you the best.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a sweet love story told in 5-7-5 poem format. You got the syllable count right, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024

Thank you for your review. Best wishes to you as well!

Comment from HarryT

Good

I like the theme of this poem, however, I don't feel emotion from it. It is more of a factual listing. What is love really to this couple. How does it make them feel?

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024

Thank you for your feedback. I?ll keep it in mind.