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Book of Christian Poetry/Photography
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Comment from
Pamusart
Hi, Brent and Sami
What is the living stone in your scripture ? Trying to figure out how it relates to the poem. I am less than a novice with the Bible
I really like the first stanza and this one
"What will I tell my black dress?
Hung and unworn she remains
Nowhere to dance she's lifeless"
Overall it flowed well. That poor little black dress. Waiting for the right boy to ask her out to a dance
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from
Nicole Schmidt
I feel the pain and desperation behind this. Rejection is never fun and a lot of times it's downright heartbreaking.
"Tears turn makeup into clay
A sad dress shining madness
It stings me until this day"
I felt this
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
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