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Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this poem, and I love that you leave it open for interpretation. I also like that you ended it with a scripture, and I particularly like the one you used. I liked your rhymes, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I enjoyed this poem, and I love that you leave it open for interpretation. I also like that you ended it with a scripture, and I particularly like the one you used. I liked your rhymes, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Very nice flow with heavy emotion! I enjoyed it very much!
"Questioning my swinging heart.
He blesses me as I reek of fear
He knows everything from the very start."
Perfect.
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Very nice flow with heavy emotion! I enjoyed it very much!
"Questioning my swinging heart.
He blesses me as I reek of fear
He knows everything from the very start."
Perfect.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
