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Comment from tempeste
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First off only in fairytales does love alone win over everything.

In real life when money is short and making ends meet is a constant struggle often love won't be enough to keep the harmony in a marriage.

At least that's how I see it.

What does the priest say:

I take you to be my husband/ wife , to have and to hold from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish, till death do us part."

Saying Vows is one thing .. keeping them is what counts , is another .

To save a marriage during a rough patch is not easy.

Some people lose their way, don't know what they really want to do or achieve.

Some start thinking the grass is greener on the other side.

It takes:

Work . Responsibility. Honesty. Respect. Understanding.Forgiveness. Commitment. Willingness. Priorities.

And much more to keep a marriage together when facing life's trials.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
    Pretty awesome review.
reply by tempeste on 06-Jun-2024
    You have 4 votes now. 😐

    Best of luck!🍀
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    😎
Comment from royowen
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Bad things can happen, but doesn't a vow, a promise count anymore, I'm afraid these days it's become far too easy to break a promise, a vow, more's the pity, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 31-May-2024


reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    For sure. The vow.
reply by royowen on 31-May-2024
    Yep
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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I can feel the upset emotion behind this poem. The only thing I'd say is that it could definatly use a graphic. Nice wording. Goodluck going forward.

 Comment Written 31-May-2024


reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    Thanks. I?ll work on a graphic.