Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Three symphonies, Eugene! One of your favourite words but overused here, I'm afraid. Otherwise, Your image is amazing, very eye-catching and your story complements the sensuousness of it in eloquent and faultless prose. Maybe it's just me but I find 'symphony' just a tad annoying, not least because it is used so much on this site. But well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

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reply by the author on 30-May-2024

Debbie,

Thank you for your helpful review. I revised the post and replaced the 3 uses of word symphony with appropriate synonyms.

I appreciate you saying the story complements the sensuousness of of the image in eloquent and faultless prose.

All the best.

Eugene

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, this is an interesting narrative. Yes, you labelled it correctly to qualify for the contest. Now, it is very eloquently written and descriptive, almost like R-rated poetry. I think what may slow this is the story element. Is it one, or is more of a narrative description of what happened?

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

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reply by the author on 30-May-2024

Lancellot,

Thank you for your review. I appreciate you saying the story it is very eloquently written and descriptive.

If I may I'd appreciate your review of my earlier write in this category titled The Heat of Their Desire.

All the best,

Eugene

Comment from Lisasview

Exceptional

Very nice photo of you Bermy...I do not think I saw one before... Anyway I think your story is rather perfect and so much like my "love" poems...
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
i have been away for quite some time...but now I am back.
Lisasview

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

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reply by the author on 30-May-2024

Lisa,

Thank you for your excellent 6 star review. I appreciate and value your comments regarding the story.

All the best,

Eugene