Comment from
Amethyst Rivers
Good luck on your submission for the contest! A very creative piece, indeed! I certainly enjoyed it!! It hooked me in and had me chuckling at the end. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-May-2024
Comment from
kahpot
Well, that would certainly be a surprise let alone somewhat painful, I really like the way you have set up the plot, and the characters names are wonderful, love the ending, very well written, best wishes for your contes****kahpot
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
Thank you for reading my silly tale!