Acrostic (my pain inside)
A Site Contest Entry29 total reviews
Comment from zaraduck6
This was such a good acrostic poem! I love how the title and first sentence is "My pain inside" which was also the vertical word. Very good. And I love the rhyme scheme and consistent syllable count. It flowed nicely. Also, the word choice was spectacular. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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This was such a good acrostic poem! I love how the title and first sentence is "My pain inside" which was also the vertical word. Very good. And I love the rhyme scheme and consistent syllable count. It flowed nicely. Also, the word choice was spectacular. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
When you meet that special person you think your love will be forever.
Sadly, the trials of life change us and sometimes a partner becomes distant and chooses to seek other goals.
Instead of moving forward, the other half chooses to hold onto the memories of their happy life together and remains faithful to their vows (until death do us part).
And they end up living in solitude. Its a very sad outcome.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Ciao!
When you meet that special person you think your love will be forever.
Sadly, the trials of life change us and sometimes a partner becomes distant and chooses to seek other goals.
Instead of moving forward, the other half chooses to hold onto the memories of their happy life together and remains faithful to their vows (until death do us part).
And they end up living in solitude. Its a very sad outcome.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024
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Thank you so very much, for your understanding and wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jessizero
I really enjoyed this poem. Well, I "enjoyed" may be the wrong word, as I wasn't happy for your suffering. I appreciated it. I also loved your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I really enjoyed this poem. Well, I "enjoyed" may be the wrong word, as I wasn't happy for your suffering. I appreciated it. I also loved your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from allison lammert
This was the perfect piece to read before turning off the light.
"In time I thought my tears would dry.
Now forward thoughts just say goodbye."
I keep rereading it and finding different things that pop out. I love the rhyming scheme.
It's a beautiful piece
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This was the perfect piece to read before turning off the light.
"In time I thought my tears would dry.
Now forward thoughts just say goodbye."
I keep rereading it and finding different things that pop out. I love the rhyming scheme.
It's a beautiful piece
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
This is so very good. You have created an acrostic poem that is meaningful and reads quite smoothly and with fresh rhymes.
I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This is so very good. You have created an acrostic poem that is meaningful and reads quite smoothly and with fresh rhymes.
I wish you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Gloria, for your wonderful and very encouraging review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. You managed to use the needed first letter in a cohesive way AND rhyme.
It's sad and relatable.
Good job good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Wonderful entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. You managed to use the needed first letter in a cohesive way AND rhyme.
It's sad and relatable.
Good job good luck in the contest
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I thought this was a very strong poem and start to finish and the graphic adds to it perfectly. This can be a tricky type of poem to do and you did it perfectly.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I thought this was a very strong poem and start to finish and the graphic adds to it perfectly. This can be a tricky type of poem to do and you did it perfectly.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Saying goodbye and knowing we will not see that person again fills us with grief and your acrostic has a powerful message here, very touching and much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Saying goodbye and knowing we will not see that person again fills us with grief and your acrostic has a powerful message here, very touching and much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very well written acrostic poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Great photo choice to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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This is a very well written acrostic poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Great photo choice to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, My Pain Inside, has the proper formatting and bemoans the losses in love that have become the hill between then and now. ...........
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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This acrostic poem, My Pain Inside, has the proper formatting and bemoans the losses in love that have become the hill between then and now. ...........
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpoy