Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I think you aimed for the serious alternative! This is the most eye-catching visual, skilfully complemented by a powerfully expressed 5-7-5 with doomsday scenario. I like it. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku movie review, Oppenheimer, describes some of the fission that is responsible for the amazing reaction of the ignition of an atomic bomb. Cool film.

 Comment Written 29-May-2024

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reply by the author on 29-May-2024

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This haiku is a good review of the movie about making the atomic bomb.
It is amazing how something that seems so inconsequential can end up causing so much destruction and death.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 29-May-2024

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reply by the author on 29-May-2024

Thank you for your positive feedback. Unfortunately, Oppenheimer did put ungodly power into the hands of some who want to play god.