Testing Times
Try, try again!2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
And a partridge in a pear tree! This is fun and humorous! I like the way you've counted down in your nonet, listing the sorry results of being unleashed on to the road! My particular favourite was six mangled round-a-bouts. A strong entry! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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And a partridge in a pear tree! This is fun and humorous! I like the way you've counted down in your nonet, listing the sorry results of being unleashed on to the road! My particular favourite was six mangled round-a-bouts. A strong entry! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Ah, thank you, Debbie :)
Comment from jessizero
I think "Four to the police" may be one syllable too many, but I'm not sure. Other than that, the syllable counts were right, and your poem was fun. I enjoyed it very much! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I think "Four to the police" may be one syllable too many, but I'm not sure. Other than that, the syllable counts were right, and your poem was fun. I enjoyed it very much! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you, Jessi. We pronounce 'police' as one syllable in UK but I didn't think of 'pol-ice' how it would be pronounced in the US. I've put a question in about it.