Twilight Dreams
Young couple in love at twilight3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
What a beautiful essence poem! You've cleverly tucked those internal rhymes in with skill. They fit perfectly and you've given us the added bonus of a perfect image to enhance your poem!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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What a beautiful essence poem! You've cleverly tucked those internal rhymes in with skill. They fit perfectly and you've given us the added bonus of a perfect image to enhance your poem!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Karen,
Thank you for your excellent review. I wrote this poem between 1:00am and 2:00am when I could not go to sleep.
All the best,
Eugene
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Wow...I wish my muse kept those hours!
:)
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice two line poem that you have written for the contest and I wish you the best in the contest. May you have a very pleasant day and may God bless you. Patricia .
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This is a very nice two line poem that you have written for the contest and I wish you the best in the contest. May you have a very pleasant day and may God bless you. Patricia .
Comment Written 26-May-2024
Comment from EeanBlack
Aspiration and delight are my middle name. It used to be Franklin, but I changed it to A.D. My doctor says I have A.D.D., but that doesn't A.D.D. up. I don't know, he speaks in circles and I don't really listen anyway. In all seriousness though this is a very good poem. It elicits a very good feeling.
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Aspiration and delight are my middle name. It used to be Franklin, but I changed it to A.D. My doctor says I have A.D.D., but that doesn't A.D.D. up. I don't know, he speaks in circles and I don't really listen anyway. In all seriousness though this is a very good poem. It elicits a very good feeling.
Comment Written 26-May-2024
